How about some Poetry?

Hey. This is just a piece of work i started the other day. Tell me what you think, leave comments and stuff.

"The Way She Tread" by Daniel(Me)

across the sands toward the distant shore
though dead and dry twas the path she tread
she would not be shaken from her quest
for she knew its deep meaning and importance
would be found at the end in her core
evicting a change in soul and spirit
that would forever make her mortal self
the essence of beauty and wisdom
bestowed to her through the trial and tribulation
in honor and glory of the narrow way she went